Paper 1 Learner Response Mock
Total = (30) = B
WWW: A superb Section A ! so impressive and excellent knowledge and quotation focus
EBI: The challenge now is maintain that level across the whole paper. Reflect one what the key factor is : time, revision, different key concepts etc
Q1 (unseen text) additional point/theory: The typography on the advert is all sans serif, offering connotations of a more youthful, modern brand. The fact the campaign encourages the audience to make this product their “first Swiss watch” reinforces the feel this is aimed at slightly younger professional men
Q2 (unseen text and CSP) additional point/theory/CSP reference: Hegemonic masculinity – advert suggests patriarchal dominance is still in place despite changes in gender representation over recent years.
Q3 (music video) additional point/theory/CSP reference: Lil Nas X came out as gay in 2019 which arguably adds an ideological element – this can be found in aspect of mise-en-scene such as costume (Lil Nas X’s costume changes and Billy Ray Cyrus’s pink suit could both be read as a subversion of traditional masculinity and western stereotypes).
3) Now focus on Section B. Section B began with two questions testing your knowledge of industry terminology. Make sure you know the answers to these (get the answers from the mark scheme if you have to):
Benefits of vertical integration: Greater control of the production process, lower costs and higher profits.
4) The Section B CSP focus was on Blinded By The Light. The impact of new technology on distribution was a weaker area in most answers. Pick out three points from the mark scheme that you could have included in your answer here.
5) Finally, identify three things you plan to revise before your next Media assessment.
Genuinely this is the best paper I've sat and done for media, I enjoyed my time with the paper and that's visible via the B grade, however it isn't all sunshines and rainbows. One of the reasons I feel I wasn't getting MORE marks could be due to the fact I write really fast, even with proof reading 5+ times, I think it's the excitement I feel after finishing a good paper that allows me to slip up. After receiving my paper today and looking through it, although I am extremely proud of myself, I do understand and see where I've slipped up (e.g. not explaining theorists properly, being to vague, just almost saying the wrong things etc.). After looking through my paper, I feel like looking through Advertising and Marketing or just Industries in general would benefit me greatly, as I almost ended up getting zero marks for a question based off of diversity? Overall I've done well and I think that looking through my theorists and terminology will help me elevate past these grades I've received in the mock. BUT I AM STILL REALLY PROUD OF MYSELF.
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